One day I went to the forest. I crossed a bridge it was creaking and wobbly I finally got off that spooky bridge .I folled the stones that was in a path I came to a door it was not locked so I opened it I heard howling. It was dark inside the tree but there was glow bugs they flew over the corner I notice it was some stairs so I went up the stairs and then I noticed what that howling was it was wolfs they where right in front of me with there tongues out . I ran down the stairs really scared I went trough the window and ran home.
This is my draft piece of writing.
Please leave a comment about what I did really well and what I need to do next time.
This is my draft piece of writing.
Please leave a comment about what I did really well and what I need to do next time.
to tegan wow i like your story
ReplyDeleteby Hayley
To Tegan
ReplyDeleteI like your post it is awesome! I Liked it when you said I was really scared I went through the window and ran home.
From Aaron
PS-scary story
Hi Tegan I like your story I like the part it was creaking and woobbly.
ReplyDeleteWow that sounds scary.
You did wall on add fall stops
you need to do next time is correct your words.
From Manaia