Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 29 August 2014

Cross Country Practice

My heart is pounding like a Elephant stomping
 Whiz Zoom!I over take 3 people
I am a Cheetah running free in the Jungle
Huff Puff! I slow down whoosh I am sprinting again
I have butterflies in my stomach
I sprint over the finish line it was faster then I thought.

Thursday, 28 August 2014

Thursday, 14 August 2014

My paper plane poem

What is that? Swooping through the air
It is white it is hazy white
It is a paper plane darting through the air
twirling whirling circling and swirling through the cloudy morning air
twirling and twirling like a leaf falling of a tree on a sunny Autumn day
spinning in a freezing whirl pool
zig-ziging in a circus 


Thursday, 29 May 2014

Story

This is my story I wrote with my buddy from Wisconsin, America.

What do you like about our story?

Thursday, 4 July 2013

disaster


One day when I was in bed sleeping I heard my Dad snoaring. Suddenley my Dad stoped snoaring and I heard a bang clang and crack. I ran outside and saw... the sun broken and seperated across the sky. I walked inside and my Dad was snoaring again. I walked outside and the sun was back to normal again. So I got back into bed.  When Dad stopped snoring I knew the sun became a disaster again!  

Alive Bins

The Alive Rubbish Bins
On a very hot day I was seriously sweaty. It was like there was a volcano about to explode! I was in my car. I looked out of the window and I saw something green and bright. I got out of the car and saw a shadow. Something on the rubbish bins moved. It was like they were talking. I listened carefully and I heard them introduce  themselves. "Hi I am Happy", "I am naughty", "I am pretty", "I am lovely", "I am camera" then I said, "can you take a photo of me?" Then another rubbish bin replied, "I am crazy". They started chasing me.  To be continued...

Thursday, 20 June 2013

Volcano

If I lived in a volcano I would swim in lava, slide down the volcano and sometimes when the volcano errupts it would be a lava slide. My friend will be a fire princess. I would wear a bright red dress and red tights on my dress there would be a little orange flame. There would be really awesome places inside the volcano like a flame pet shop where all the pets inside are made with fire. Nextdoor, there would  be a horse riding place. The red horses would have rockets at the back of them that make them go faster. Also, it would  leave  a trail on the ground of lava. There would  be  more places as well but those would be my favourite. A volcano would be a hot scary place to live in.

Thursday, 23 May 2013

magical mila

Magical Mila
Magical Mila has bright blue hair with sparkly plum purple clips.
Her eyes are light pink with dark pink vanes and green pupils.
She is 1.12 m tall.
Her teeth are white as a bunny.
Buzz, buzz.
She loves bumble bees.
She is good at magic.
She is as pretty as a princess.
She is really friendly.
She lives in a magic palace next to the Eiffel Tower in Paris.


Tuesday, 16 April 2013

Bella and a kitten

One day Bella woke up at midnight Bella's kitten Lilly talked it said (we need to go to the moon) Bella said (OK) she snuck out of bed she made some samwiches and 3 apples for her kitten Lilly and a different person and herself .She rushed out side with her kitten Lilly Bella decided to build a rocket Lilly helped build it as well in anther two minutes they were done Bella and Lilly jumped in the colourful rocket and blasted into space up to the moon when they hit the moon  The rocket stooped .There was one little blue alien next to a banner saying welcome to the moon Bella and Lilly walked out the moon was bouncy they walked past the little blue alien but  the alien fowlod Bella and Lilly Bella thought that he wanted some food so she sat on a crater and gave some food to the alien and Lilly and then they played games until Lilly and Bella did have to go home.

Wednesday, 10 April 2013

My made up story

One day I went to the forest. I crossed a bridge it was creaking and wobbly I finally got off that spooky bridge .I folled  the stones that was in a path I came to a door it was not locked so I opened  it I heard   howling. It was dark inside the tree but there was glow bugs they flew over the corner I notice it was some stairs so I went up the stairs  and then I noticed what that howling was it was wolfs they where right in front of me with  there  tongues out . I ran down the stairs really scared I went trough the window and ran home. 


This is my draft piece of writing.
Please leave a comment about what I did really well and what I need to do next time.

Wednesday, 3 April 2013

Easter

On Sunday it was Easter. I got  28 Easter eggs  from the Easter bunny one  from my uncle. It was very fun looking for them but my mum  evened  them out with my cousins and my sister.

Here is a math problem;
if I had 62 Easter eggs my mum had 5 and my dad had 6 do you know what it equals?